Well, the art was good...
..But thats about where it ends.
The animation was substandard, the music was repetative and the story skipped points all over the place.
It looks like you just showed all the scenes tht were relativly easy to animate, and everything else you left out.
I find it interesting that after spending a month at sea in a liferaft (growing no beard, amazingly enough) that he wanted to get some sun on a beach.